It's been more than a week, but I don't see why I can't add some critique, too. 1. Metric system, please (eg. 3-inch). And check your spelling (eg. medeival, rubys). I can see a lot of things that have to be corretced, but there are too many for me to list. 2. The containment procedures should be r...

Yeah, I wrote a thing. Basically the first act of a tale series.

http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/bennings

First tab.

" Because the guys at the real foundation websites WERE TOO MUCH OF TIGHTASSES TO BE PRODUCTIVE AND HELP ME." You do realize they can read this, right? "SCP-XXXX is to be contained in Site ███ in a secure, cylindrical cell that is 10 meters in diameter, and 5 meters in height, with walls made of ste...

It seems that you are not getting my point. If I saw that a species turned into a potential threat to me I'd try to delete it as quickly as possible. What for? Because I don't want to be the deleted one. Well, if we take 682 to be the most dangerous that can actively harm us as opposed to some form...

I think the reasons the CI never get discussed is because there's nothing really to discuss. Their name's stupid, their goal is to "Tak ovur teh WORLD!!!", and they nick stuff from the Foundation. That's pretty much it. Although I did include the CI in one tale: some random goon named Eddie who didn...

Creepiest dream I ever had was basically I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream's climax set at a swamp instead of an ice cavern. Ending starts pretty much the same; the protagonists reach the cans to find they don't have a can opener, Ted poses like Elias from Platoon in despair, then grabs a tree bran...

Not really sure what Mass media has to do with anything, especially since newspapers and such were pretty common one hundred years ago. I'd also say we weren't naive back a hundred years ago; if anything we were more cynical, with World War one raging, and the Paris Peace conference is about as cyni...

That is true and it's non canonical. The canon answer to this is that no one knows where the entity came from. It just popped out of nowhere. It's unfortunate that the Foundation still doesn't have a clue as to where the entity came from. Although the Statue itself does kind of resemble an alien. I...

An interesting thought on 173. But I don't understand how a being that all this time has been living in the state it is currently in. It was hard for me to understand the story. It was once a being that could do as it wanted butt it is now confined because a god kept transforming it into abominatio...

Hmm. Maybe but you also have to consider the abnormally high speed that it travels at. Also the fact that it likes to snap necks and strangle people. Although about it being a virus. The canon lists it as "A sculpture made of concrete and rebar" and I think that maybe 173 might be thinking somethin...