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I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Fri Aug 09, 2013 7:46 pm
by ColePatrolGaming
I really want to make a new SCP game but I have no experience with game making and I need somebody else to take up the idea and make it for me. Here is the idea.

Intro: Main Character (mc) wakes up in a prison bed. "Oh no! Crap! How did I get here. Ohhh. All I did was... well nothing" <---mc talking (sound and captions)
MC: Oh wait. (Picks up class D orientation letter) I've been captured.
(Door Opens)
Soldier 1: We have some work for you.
Soldier 2: Follow us. Don't do anything stupid. If you try anything remember that we have you on the list for termination.
MC: Yes sir.
Sol. 1: You from now on will be known as D-2786
(walks down to a new room.)
Sol. 2: Open that door and get in that room alongside the others. Follow the instuctions from the intercom and you'll be fine.
MC (walks up to the other Class Ds) : Something is wrong.
Intercom: Speak No More!!!! Enter the hard glass room next to SCP- 080s Containment Cell.
MC: (enters room and looks up noticing the observation deck above the two rooms.
MC: its dark in here and... I feel weary.
Intercom: Well than fall asleep on the bed!!!!
MC: I didn't know I was that loud.

(LOADING SCREEN)

MC: Woah. I'm all sweaty. I had a nightmare.
Intercom: That was expected.
MC: You watched me???
Intercom: That was our order. All of the Class Ds had nightmares. You are next to the room of the boogieman.
Sol. 2: Gears told us to shut up about the boogieman. We have to call him SCP:080!!! You know that!!!
Intercom: Anyways... enter the room since you were the first one to wake.
(MC walks into the containment cell.)
MC: Its dark in here. Hello. Anyone here. Is this a prank. AHHHHH!

(Loading Screen)

From then on it will be gameplay. The point of the game is to escape, survive, and destroying SCP-122. The Boogieman has breached containment because you left the door open and you have to hide from the soldiers who are trying to kill you. When you destroy SCP-122 the Boogieman find you and takes solid form knocking you out. In the end the boogieman drags you into a field. There he screams in your face. Then the game ends. A Lullaby plays and the credits show up. The game will be called Sleep. Please make it. Anyone willing to take up this idea???

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Fri Aug 09, 2013 10:10 pm
by Cridone
Make it with Game Maker. You don't need ANY coding experience with that.

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 3:20 am
by LukeDude759
The dialogue could definitely be improved. Once I have access to an actual keyboard and not a touchscreen on a glitchy tablet, I could do that for you.

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 3:07 pm
by ColePatrolGaming
LukeDude759 wrote:The dialogue could definitely be improved. Once I have access to an actual keyboard and not a touchscreen on a glitchy tablet, I could do that for you.


Thanks!!! I have pretty much no experience, money, or time to make this. I barely got the time to write it.

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 4:26 pm
by Cridone
ColePatrolGaming wrote:
LukeDude759 wrote:The dialogue could definitely be improved. Once I have access to an actual keyboard and not a touchscreen on a glitchy tablet, I could do that for you.


Thanks!!! I have pretty much no experience, money, or time to make this. I barely got the time to write it.
I wrote wrote:Make it with Game Maker. You don't need ANY coding experience with that.

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 5:38 pm
by SaitoFOX
Cridone wrote:
ColePatrolGaming wrote:
LukeDude759 wrote:The dialogue could definitely be improved. Once I have access to an actual keyboard and not a touchscreen on a glitchy tablet, I could do that for you.


Thanks!!! I have pretty much no experience, money, or time to make this. I barely got the time to write it.
I wrote wrote:Make it with Game Maker. You don't need ANY coding experience with that.

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Sat Aug 10, 2013 7:44 pm
by ColePatrolGaming
What saitoFOX?

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 4:47 pm
by Cridone
ColePatrolGaming wrote:What saitoFOX?
He was probably giving my idea thumbs up.

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 5:59 pm
by LukeDude759
Intro: Main Character (mc) wakes up in a prison bed. "Wait, this isn't my bedroom. Is this a jail cell? How did I get here? I didn't even do anything!" <---mc talking (sound and captions) (Note: I assumed you wanted to imply the emergency protocol was initiated and he was an innocent civilian. Correct me if I'm wrong)
MC: Oh wait. (Picks up class D orientation sheet) Now I remember.
(Door Opens)
Soldier 1: We have some work for you.
Soldier 2: Follow us. We're authorized to terminate any disobedient subjects, so don't do anything stupid.
MC: Uh... Yes sir.
Sol. 1: From now on, you will be referred to as D-2786. In case you forget, it's on your orientation sheet.
(walks down to a new room.)
Sol. 2: Open that door and get in the room with the others. Follow the instructions from the intercom, and you'll be fine.
MC (walks up to the other Class Ds) : Something doesn't feel right...
Intercom: Stop talking and enter the room next to SCP-080's Containment Cell.
MC: (enters room and looks up noticing the observation deck above the two rooms)
MC: Its dark in here, and... I feel weary.
Intercom: D-2786, fall asleep on the bed.
MC: (Whispering to himself) Was I that loud?

(LOADING SCREEN)

MC: (Wakes up screaming, then breathes heavily for a few seconds) Sorry. I had a nightmare.
Intercom: That was expected.
MC: You were watching me?
Intercom: That was our order. All of the Class Ds had nightmares. You are next to the room of the boogieman.
Sol. 2: Gears told us not to mention its informal name. We have to call it SCP-080. You know that.
Intercom: Right, well, anyway... *Ahem* D-2786, enter the room.
(MC walks into the containment cell.)
MC: Its dark in here... (Calling out) Hello? Anyone here? (To himself) Is this a prank? AHHHHH!


Made some revisions and proofread some grammar and spelling errors. I tried not to make any changes to the overall meaning of any of the sentences If I made any mistakes or you want something changed, let me know.

Re: I really want to make a new scp game

Posted: Mon Aug 12, 2013 1:46 pm
by ColePatrolGaming
LukeDude759 wrote:Intro: Main Character (mc) wakes up in a prison bed. "Wait, this isn't my bedroom. Is this a jail cell? How did I get here? I didn't even do anything!" <---mc talking (sound and captions) (Note: I assumed you wanted to imply the emergency protocol was initiated and he was an innocent civilian. Correct me if I'm wrong)
MC: Oh wait. (Picks up class D orientation sheet) Now I remember.
(Door Opens)
Soldier 1: We have some work for you.
Soldier 2: Follow us. We're authorized to terminate any disobedient subjects, so don't do anything stupid.
MC: Uh... Yes sir.
Sol. 1: From now on, you will be referred to as D-2786. In case you forget, it's on your orientation sheet.
(walks down to a new room.)
Sol. 2: Open that door and get in the room with the others. Follow the instructions from the intercom, and you'll be fine.
MC (walks up to the other Class Ds) : Something doesn't feel right...
Intercom: Stop talking and enter the room next to SCP-080's Containment Cell.
MC: (enters room and looks up noticing the observation deck above the two rooms)
MC: Its dark in here, and... I feel weary.
Intercom: D-2786, fall asleep on the bed.
MC: (Whispering to himself) Was I that loud?

(LOADING SCREEN)


MC: (Wakes up screaming, then breathes heavily for a few seconds) Sorry. I had a nightmare.
Intercom: That was expected.
MC: You were watching me?
Intercom: That was our order. All of the Class Ds had nightmares. You are next to the room of the boogieman.
Sol. 2: Gears told us not to mention its informal name. We have to call it SCP-080. You know that.
Intercom: Right, well, anyway... *Ahem* D-2786, enter the room.
(MC walks into the containment cell.)
MC: Its dark in here... (Calling out) Hello? Anyone here? (To himself) Is this a prank? AHHHHH!


Made some revisions and proofread some grammar and spelling errors. I tried not to make any changes to the overall meaning of any of the sentences If I made any mistakes or you want something changed, let me know.
Its perfect!!!!