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Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 1:06 pm**

This is best. For now, back to the question of focus.

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 1:49 pm**

After the backstories are done,which characters does not have a backstory yet?

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 3:35 pm**

Holy hay! I too missed a lot.

I see you all like this new story better. Like the title says, some of the elements were derived from headcannon. So you most likely never heared about the relationship between Luna, Celestia, and Discord. Here is a link to the first epeisode of the headcannon. http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WFv1pcJe00U. Now it's not a cartoon, but rather a story told with a series of stills being shown in relation to the story.
As for communication, Twilight could use Spike, and foundation personnel could have walkie talkies. I'll figure out the rest of them eventually.

Nightmare, I like your 1025 pages more than mrpeanut188's. So I vote for yours.

LTF-714 should remain the Alicorn Amulet. It only corrupts magic users, all other ponies are unaffected by it. But for the sake of this mod, and if the D class you play as is an earth or pegasus pony, we could say that it provides the benefits offered by SCP-714.

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I'm also surprised that no one read my Fluttershy revision on page 53.

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:07 pm**

Pony wrote:Headcanon

We should really not incorporate headcanon. It makes your story look really lazy.

Pony wrote:I'm also surprised that no one read my Fluttershy revision on page 53.

I did, but I didn't bother breaking it down. Though one thing really bothers me about it, if FS starts going arouny killing ponies, why would two scouts just stand there and have a chat about it instead of running away?

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:32 pm**

Because they aren't cowards? I don't know.

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How do you guys think I could make Luna upset enough for the Nightmare Forces to take control of her again?

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:03 pm**

Well that depends on what a Nightmare Force is.

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:07 pm**

The Nightmare Forces are cannon. If you read the MLP comics, you shoukd know exacly what they are.
They are a group of entities that feed off the fears and insecurities of ponies. When Luna became gealous of Celestia, they fed on her in an equivelant way to what's in my story. Eventually, Luna allowed them to take control of her, turning her into Nightmare Moon. In the comics, Nightnare Moon doesn't come to be, but rather Nightmare Rarity.

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:18 pm**

Pony wrote:The Nightmare Forces are cannon. If you read the MLP comics, you shoukd know exacly what they are.
They are a group of entities that feed off the fears and insecurities of ponies. When Luna became gealous of Celestia, they fed on her in an equivelant way to what's in my story. Eventually, Luna allowed them to take control of her, turning her into Nightmare Moon. In the comics, Nightnare Moon doesn't come to be, but rather Nightmare Rarity.

Hmmm....perhaps maybe this could be used for SCP-008?

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:19 pm**

That's not a bad idea!
This should be implemented, but let's get the others' opinions first.

Posted: **Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:21 pm**

Pony wrote:I see you all like this new story better. Like the title says, some of the elements were derived from headcannon. So you most likely never heared about the relationship between Luna, Celestia, and Discord. Here is a link to the first epeisode of the headcannon. http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WFv1pcJe00U. Now it's not a cartoon, but rather a story told with a series of stills being shown in relation to the story.

So in order to make this story make sense, you resort to assuming that your head canon is true and that Luna and Discord were some kind of close friends, despite the fact that she helped banish him for eternity.
Those kinds of youtubers usually pull information out of their ass, you can't assume it's all canon/true.

Pony wrote:As for communication, Twilight could use Spike, and foundation personnel could have walkie talkies. I'll figure out the rest of them eventually.

I wroted a story for this occasion
"Alright Spike, lets write a letter to the Princess"
"Really Twi? You don't need to send her another letter, we're out of scrolls and my claw is cramping"
"Celestia said to use you to keep her updated on current events, current is now"
"But nothing is happening...I'm going back to Ponyville..." *Turns to see Ponyville, covered in a giant bowl and it's residents enslaved by Trixie* "fine, what do you want me to write...."
Meanwhile, the volunteer ponies Bright forced to join the foundation have no idea what Walkie Talkies are.

Pony wrote:LTF-714 should remain the Alicorn Amulet. It only corrupts magic users, all other ponies are unaffected by it. But for the sake of this mod, and if the D class you play as is an earth or pegasus pony, we could say that it provides the benefits offered by SCP-714.

Is Trixie still in this? Because her part had some horrible implications to the time line.

Here are a few comments I wanted to make about the background story.

Spoiler

Pony wrote:some elements derived from headcannon

oh no

Pony wrote: Dr. Bright had failed to check the blast resilience of the blast shield guarding the room he stood in.

What was Dr Bright doing with the object? D-Class are the ones elected to risk their lives.

Pony wrote:He ordered the class D in the other room to pick up the SCP and drop it, causing it to explode.

wut

Pony wrote:From previous tests,

Dr Bright forgot to revise protection measures after the last time all the scientists were teleported to a different dimension

Pony wrote:he knew that anyone within five meters of the object when it exploded, would die, all others were sent to a new dimension.

So....being in the blast radius kills you, not being in the blast radius yet somehow still in the blast radius teleports you

Pony wrote:Dr. Bright on the other hand was standing behind one of them.

hmm, I wish I could watch over this test, but this damn scientist in front of me is just too tall.

Pony wrote:Then he came to the realization that he too was a pony.

The radio said “No, Bright. You are the demons”
And then Bright was a pony.

Pony wrote:When princess Celestia had learned about this new pony, she sent a royal guard to go and bring him to her. When he arrived, she greeted him and asked his name. Dr. Bright gave her his last name, and his rank in the SCP Foundation.

I'm Bright, I'm a senior manager...oh wait, Commander already said this...am I reviewing the correct piece?

Pony wrote: But she also knew there were a few things in dire need of containment in a specialized facility,

Like?
Oh yeah, that's the point, ponies already have a place for specialized containment, it's called Tartarus

Pony wrote:so she gave Dr. Bright the right to do what was required to recreate the Foundation.

So, how does she know Bright is telling the truth?

Pony wrote:After Discord was re-encased in stone, princess Luna began to feel very upset.

What?

Pony wrote:Discord was there for her after her parents had died in the war, and seeing him re-encased in stone was too much.

What?

Pony wrote:She began to react to Celestia with anger and hatred.

Why?

Pony wrote:flew away from Canterlot as part of her plan of fusing the Elements of Harmony with the respected ponies they are connected to. This allowed her to remain undetected for an easier time performing her fusion spell.

"I flew away from Canterlot, phase 1 of my plan is complete"

Pony wrote:Once princess Celestia had realized that Nightmare Moon had made her return,

How?

Pony wrote:she called for Twilight and her friends to come to Canterlot ASAP. When they arrived, she told them to use the Elements of Harmony on Nightmare Moon, and gave them their respected elements. After a discussion as to what their plan of action was, they decided to split up and search for Nightmare Moon.

The elements need to be used together in order to work
"Dear Princess Celestia, Today I learned that stupid decisions come with horrible consequences."

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