The title makes it very obvious.This is my feedback thread for my SCPs.
I am,very obviously,going to have rules.
.: Rules :.
I would like it if you did not spam my topic.I am looking for help with my SCPs,and I would not like to see random discussions.
Do not steal my work.I have written poetry,short stories,books,comics and just about everything else.I recognize my work when I see it.
I am looking for helpful criticism,not a bunch of rude comments.While I respect your opinion,I will consider it rude if you just post 'sucks' and do not say any ways that I can improve.
I will add more if I have to.
My SCPs can be found in the next post.
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#2.: SCP Index :.
Here,you can find the SCPs I have written.
Safe Class
None
Euclid Class
One.Will be added later today.
Here,you can find the SCPs I have written.
Safe Class
None
Euclid Class
Spoiler
Keter ClassOne.Will be added later today.
Amxen & the art of her set as my avatar belong to me.
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#3Making your own SCP's?
I used to do that a lot too!
But I don't do it anymore.
But it's fun coming up with
backstory's and deciding if it's
Keter, Euclid, or safe
I used to do that a lot too!
But I don't do it anymore.
But it's fun coming up with
backstory's and deciding if it's
Keter, Euclid, or safe
- Modder of SCP Containment breach.
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#5Hmm... seems good! Have you applied for the SCP foundation yet? Thanks to this I kinda wanna really write too and apply for them too! It seems hard to do that though.
SCP: Eric Breach nanomod maker (if anyone wants to revamp it be my guest, as it is now defunct)
Fan of Doctor Who, Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency, Sleepy Hollow, Person of Interest, Happy (2017) and Silicon Valley. And also MCU films.
Fan of Doctor Who, Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency, Sleepy Hollow, Person of Interest, Happy (2017) and Silicon Valley. And also MCU films.
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#6Just because they don't sugarcoat their critiques doesn't mean they're douchebags.Juicy wrote:however there are a lot of advanced users who are douchebags
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#7So, because some random user got mad at you for downvoting some article it automatically means that a lot of them are douchebags?Juicy wrote:Flamming you for downvoting an article mean (some) of them are douchebags
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#8Well, for one thing, the grammar is pretty bad. Always put spaces behind your commas and periods. Looks like a jumbled up mess. Otherwise, it's fine. Gotta admit, though. The hisses are pretty comedic, like a laughably evil snake from a cartoon or something. Think you should take the ssss's out of the transcript.
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#9This should be in metric.SCP-XXXX is to be kept in a locked 16 ft by 16 ft container
Why?Two of the four must be armed guards an the others must be D-Class personnel.
Again, why? This makes Falark come across as a self-insert.Dr.Falark must always be present when testing takes place.
Should be metric.100 mph.
No real point to this sentence.The eyes of the entity also appear to be interesting.
What? This sentence seems to be taking the piss out of people running down dead ends in horror movies, and I can't tell if it's serious or not. Also I really don't think the Foundation would have that many dead ends everywhere.Most of them involve chasing victims down dead end hallways.
Overall, it just seems like a generic steam robot that kills people. I didn't really like it; there's no real narrative here, just a robot that does stuff. If it was uploaded to the site, I'd probably downvote, I'm afraid. That's my opinion on it, at least.