I have begun work on my first SCP. (Critique needed!)

Redflameman

Re: I have begun work on my first SCP. (Critique needed!)

#11 by Redflameman

I realized how crappy that SCP was, I made two more actually, these are better. The water entity was completely rejected but it would be nice if you guys would critique it. (You guys are a lot more nice then the SCP veterans are...) But the "Gates of hell" hasn't been seen by the SCP-wiki yet so you guys can tell me if its good.

lololord

Re: I have begun work on my first SCP. (Critique needed!)

#12 by lololord

This is actually pretty good

Dr. Maruss

Re: I have begun work on my first SCP. (Critique needed!)

#13 by Dr. Maruss

What is 1304-2?

Sparks

Re: I have begun work on my first SCP. (Critique needed!)

#14 by Sparks

Juicy wrote:
Dr. Maruss wrote:What is 1304-2?
Something about reviving dead posts

Said scp has now been terminated, and everything touched by it will be redacted from further changing.

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