I made 2 things, 1 being just an infection description overhaul and the second an ear overlay (which is kind of sloppy).
Description -
This is really just my opinion, if anything. I didn't like how the infection description was in capitals whereas other things aren't (such as SCP-008's infection).
So Syphen (originally me) changed it a bit:
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Also I thought a slower infection development would be a tad better as well.Overlay -
These aren't that good and I don't really know a good way for it to slowly take up the screen. I thought just a simple fade in would be good but it would look kind of cheesy.
Tell me your ideas -
Stage 1:
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Stage 2:
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Stage 3:
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Stage 4 (pretty much over):
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Stage 5 (nothing to really see here):
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So yeah, tell me what you think of them and give some ideas + feedback. It would be appreciated.