Wait, so this game takes place in Columbus, Ohio? Because, thats where I live n' shit. I know alot about downtown, so you should base the game in a REAL building, because there are alot of old ones that are pretty damn creepy. Just consider it. Plus I think there should be at least one reference tha...
What I think is that 096 should do some damage to the area around him while he's flipping out. Maybe in the pump room, while he's stumbling around he knocks over a server, or swipes at it and takes a good chunk out of it. After he [REDACTED]'s the guard there should be a noise for him calming down, ...
Note to self:
Never trust talking toilets.
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Also, I must say, the story was very interesting and well written. However, I knew the plot twist before it even happened. It was obvious.
That game was very good, but it wasn't scary at all. I'm serious. The only time I was scared was when I was first introduced to the pigman in the dark. And at the end of the piston room, I was terrified. But from then on, all that ever happened was walking, puzzles, a small visit from the water mons...
Read up on this DWM bullshit... Meh. They already white-flagged it. Our queen is safe once again, but I need to state my opinion on Molestia herself. Rape and molestation IN REAL LIFE is bad. But in a cartoon? As long as it is not SPECIFICALLY PROMOTING IT TO YOUNGER/OLDER/DEAD AUDIENCES it's OK to ...