#47
by Cranbersher
So I have decided I need some feedback on part of the first scene. When the D-Class are finally sent in to test with SCP-173, one of them is holding a camera. He is then instructed over the intercom to "Take a picture for the SCP file," which he proceeds to do. (Now this film doesn't exactly have a solemn tone all the time, so expect some "silly" bits.) Another D-Class decides to stand next to SCP-173 while the picture is taken, and the flash goes off, leaving this D-Class nearly blind and rubbing his eyes. The intercom then says to "Cease the shenanigans or you will be terminated," and proceeds to instruct the D-Class to retake the photo, D-Class free, which is accomplished. At this point one of the group has essentially forfeited keeping direct eye contact due to the camera, at which the D-Class are instructed to keep direct eye contact and alert each other before blinking. So the other two are on their own, until one looks over and sees a rock on the floor of the chamber. (How SCP-____-J got in there we may never know) He wanders over to it, becomes slightly lethargic, and sits down next to it. The Last D-Class is struggling to keep his sights on SCP-173 while pleading for the others to come back and help, to which they reply "I can see dammit! I can't help it I have Photophobia!" and "...Ehhh....I'll do it later..." and then the Last D-Class and SCP-173 have a stare-down for a few more seconds and then....
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Bad Things..
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Bad, Crunchy Things......
...Thoughts? Feelings? Critiques?
This is what Dropping the Chief looks like.
