I'm too chicken for creepypasta.

I think I found a new picture for when i ban someone:

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Well I read the story "Scarlet Harvest". My thoughts on it. To start with I consider myself to be a desensitized individual, when my fellow classmates dissected a sheep heart many years ago I gladly inspected it and played around the aorta while others felt sick.

The story is well written, in terms of grammar, punctuation and the like, though I don't like how often the author will abbreviate someones name at times. The plot is your basic "Kill these people horrifically since they are unpure/dumb/Insert reason here". The death and mutilation scenes are well written but don't go into enough detail in my opinion in terms of the exact organs and body parts being destroyed, but there is plenty there to draw you own visualizations I can say that for a fact.

I felt that it was a bit unrealistic since I highly doubt someone could get away with several of the more overt death scenes without being seen, especially the *SPOILER* part where she brutally kills Snips for finding a prior dead corpse, I know that since I have participated in theater productions before that finding a secluded spot is almost impossible, let alone to fight and kill someone *END OF SPOILERS*.

I also find the reasons for the main character to go insane seemed forced, there are teachers that have to teach far worse students and they never snap. Though the main character may have had mental issues to start with, but this is never hinted at or shown.

All in all it is mostly a gore story for the sake of gore, if your into that then read on, if not then I am sure there is something better you could read.

The story you described sounds like Cheerilees garden, unless Scarlet Harvest is a rewrite.

Steelpoint, please read this and provide your opinion. Don't forget the other three pages. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7132369/1/A ... us-Rainbow

also become a brony pls

I stand corrected, it was cheerilees garden that I read, a minor misread of the title.

Steelpoint wrote:I stand corrected, it was cheerilees garden that I read, a minor misread of the title.

Okay, but read the fanfic I mentioned please.

I don't know, Dead Space 3 is at 95%.

Also a squeal of sorts to Cupcakes? That was the horribly written fanfic that somehow garnered a lot of attention.

Also I have no intention in becoming a "Brony". If anything I associate the word Brony with Otaku, for those that don't know an Otaku is a title given to someone with an obsession on Anime and other Japanese media. Many people would reffer to Anime fans as Otaku's back in the day, and still do to an extent today. When I hear the word Brony I associate it with those people obsessed with MLP.

*Also I am not a fan of MLP to start with

Uh, m'kay. And about that fanfic. I've stated this many times now, and I'm going to do it again.

It's depressing in the beginning parts, but as Rainbow Dash recovers both physically and psychologically, it becomes brighter. The story is very detailed and amusing, and I never lost my interest in reading it. I continously read every word of the story, and I did not get bored. I just continued. When I was done, I didn't seem happy or sad. But inside, I felt so happy to have read a huge story. I don't read much, but that story was still pleasing. And being a brony isn't something to be ashamed of. I get teased for being a brony at school and I couldn't care less. The episodes are, as I said about the fanfic, detailed and amusing. If you have nothing else to do, then I recommend becoming a brony. It's fun to watch episodes, artwork, read fanfics (well, that was the first MLP fanfic I've ever read so far), and... clop, obviously.

Come on, Steelpoint. Join us. We need a brony admin.