I have created this thread so we can share and discuss poems we have found or wrote.
PS: no poems about weed or other drugs (that goes for you too soulzarath) :3
As usual, i'll start
In darkness of the night
I spied him in a tree
Sat I froze by the sight
He was looking at me
The summer's heat became a chill
The angel of death at his kill
My heart skipped with the fright
Blinked my eyes to bet'r see
Glanced back with all my might
Parted he my comp'ny
My chest was quickly pounding still
The angel of death at his kill
I did rise and take flight
The fear made me to flee
From darkness into light
To free captivity
Unbinding my soul from his will
The angel of death at his kill
Many years since that night
Gazed I on that braz'n be
Mem'ries of still incite
Fears of my slavery
Existence of him makes me ill
The angel of death at his kill
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#2Perfect time to post this poem.
[youtube]LROpGk4xywE[/youtube]
First half of the vid is a poem btw
[youtube]LROpGk4xywE[/youtube]
First half of the vid is a poem btw
Re: Poetry <3
#3I like rhyming, lemme try.
Would like opinions on it please
One day of the year
and candy abound
a night for fun fear
and joy all around.
The night broken was
by the silence so sudden
find out I must
why the town quiet has gotten.
I see shapes in the black
and the dark shades of night
to always watch my back
to stay out of fright.
I see the man now
the silent cause of this
his look makes me raise my brow
there's somethign I did miss.
The head turned my way
with a smile so dark and scary
this usually funny day
was not anymore merry.
The thing followed me
with a watery gurgling sound
I looked behind to see
he was gone from the ground.
I felt a sudden stroke
and i started to fall
my lungs beginning to choke
when for help I tried to call.
When I opened my eyes
a frightening sound that calls
my ears filled with painful cries
in these strange brick walled halls.
In a great and empty room
a burning sight I did see
cause in the middle, so dark a gloom
the man stood to be.
With a child hanging from his hand
not even 10 of age
the touch of this monster man
rotting the child on stage.
He turned to look at me
with a huge smile on his face
opened his hand, the child dropped free
and walked closer at a quickening pace.
The man spoke song like words
now I only hear those in my mind
all of my body now hurts
I'm trapped by him, confined.
"Theres no way out of here
so listen to these words of me
My bonnie lies over the ocean
My bonnie lies over the sea
".
Would like opinions on it please

One day of the year
and candy abound
a night for fun fear
and joy all around.
The night broken was
by the silence so sudden
find out I must
why the town quiet has gotten.
I see shapes in the black
and the dark shades of night
to always watch my back
to stay out of fright.
I see the man now
the silent cause of this
his look makes me raise my brow
there's somethign I did miss.
The head turned my way
with a smile so dark and scary
this usually funny day
was not anymore merry.
The thing followed me
with a watery gurgling sound
I looked behind to see
he was gone from the ground.
I felt a sudden stroke
and i started to fall
my lungs beginning to choke
when for help I tried to call.
When I opened my eyes
a frightening sound that calls
my ears filled with painful cries
in these strange brick walled halls.
In a great and empty room
a burning sight I did see
cause in the middle, so dark a gloom
the man stood to be.
With a child hanging from his hand
not even 10 of age
the touch of this monster man
rotting the child on stage.
He turned to look at me
with a huge smile on his face
opened his hand, the child dropped free
and walked closer at a quickening pace.
The man spoke song like words
now I only hear those in my mind
all of my body now hurts
I'm trapped by him, confined.
"Theres no way out of here
so listen to these words of me
My bonnie lies over the ocean
My bonnie lies over the sea

What fun is there in making sense?
Now, if you will excuse me i have some chaos to wreak.
Resident forum robot monkey, and chaos incarnate.
Now, if you will excuse me i have some chaos to wreak.
Resident forum robot monkey, and chaos incarnate.
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#5Not bad. Although your rapping skills are stereotypical white. It needs a pinch of OG. I used to rap. Then I somehow got influenced by that screamo shit I listen to.Sparks wrote:I like rhyming, lemme try.
Would like opinions on it please![]()
One day of the year
and candy abound
a night for fun fear
and joy all around.
The night broken was
by the silence so sudden
find out I must
why the town quiet has gotten.
I see shapes in the black
and the dark shades of night
to always watch my back
to stay out of fright.
I see the man now
the silent cause of this
his look makes me raise my brow
there's somethign I did miss.
The head turned my way
with a smile so dark and scary
this usually funny day
was not anymore merry.
The thing followed me
with a watery gurgling sound
I looked behind to see
he was gone from the ground.
I felt a sudden stroke
and i started to fall
my lungs beginning to choke
when for help I tried to call.
When I opened my eyes
a frightening sound that calls
my ears filled with painful cries
in these strange brick walled halls.
In a great and empty room
a burning sight I did see
cause in the middle, so dark a gloom
the man stood to be.
With a child hanging from his hand
not even 10 of age
the touch of this monster man
rotting the child on stage.
He turned to look at me
with a huge smile on his face
opened his hand, the child dropped free
and walked closer at a quickening pace.
The man spoke song like words
now I only hear those in my mind
all of my body now hurts
I'm trapped by him, confined.
"Theres no way out of here
so listen to these words of me
My bonnie lies over the ocean
My bonnie lies over the sea".

Caught in the weed smoke.INFINITE561 wrote: no poems about weed or other drugs (that goes for you too soulzarath) :3
Nothing like a bong choke.
Dealing with tha weed folk.
Fuck yeah it's time to toke.
Drowning in drug fountains.
High as the mountains.
Gonna be nice and long.
But who dafuq is counting?
I'm tha white Obama.
Toking marijuana.
This joint is bomb.
And so was yo mama.
So take that infinite.
Don't take it to a extremity.
'Cuz weed is my remedy.
To this reality.
*spank* UGH, spitting out my rhymes.
You wanted poetry so I give you my raps.
Girlscouts thinking that denial is a crime.
Bitch please step aside I don't give two craps.
Sometimes i need to know when to stop so i dont get my ass handled
KCF
KCF
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#6Roses are red, that much is true, but violets are purple, not fucking blue.
Call me Baton Guy.
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#7Roses are greeń̄̔͝ wrote:Roses are red, that much is true, but violets are purple, not fucking blue.
Ponies are transformers
My poem makes no sense
.....Refrigerator
Sometimes i need to know when to stop so i dont get my ass handled
KCF
KCF
Re: Poetry <3
#8Soulzarath, what if i told you your poem makes perfect sense, because it'a a haiku poem?
What fun is there in making sense?
Now, if you will excuse me i have some chaos to wreak.
Resident forum robot monkey, and chaos incarnate.
Now, if you will excuse me i have some chaos to wreak.
Resident forum robot monkey, and chaos incarnate.
Re: Poetry <3
#9wtf is datSparks wrote:Soulzarath, what if i told you your poem makes perfect sense, because it'a a haiku poem?
Sometimes i need to know when to stop so i dont get my ass handled
KCF
KCF
Re: Poetry <3
#10A is a Chinese poem with 5 syllables, then 7, then 5Soulzarath wrote:wtf is datSparks wrote:Soulzarath, what if i told you your poem makes perfect sense, because it'a a haiku poem?
A true friend is somebody who stands by you and comforts you when you feel down, this is why I love fridge raiders