So I made a creepy pasta yesterday because I was bored, and I honestly think I did a decent job with it. Please tell me what you think!

Read the creepypasta here: http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/That_ ... You_Forget

It's supposed to be He not he.

he took a thin bottle

But you know the itch around your body? That's the normal itch

99.9/100 for that one mistake.

I really liked the story as it sounds like something that really could happen IRL. I also dare you to make a SCP.

I have, I put it on a forum or something, but it was about an extremely heavy bottle filled with sand, and when opened in a confined space, it would pour out sand, constantly, suffocating the person that opened it, and it would lock the doors around it or some sheet.

Number please?

ApplePiah wrote:Number please?

It wasn't on the real wiki, it was on like a side page for others to look about

Read it for a bit and looked at it... Seem pretty frikqn terrifying except some spelling mistakes/typos

Oh I see... It's a draft.

Not bad

Not bad, buddy ;) Keep writing

thanks, should I stick with it in the future?