Ltn Vasquez wrote:

Soulzarath wrote:May I enlist?

* Name: Eko Jr Bloodheart
* Rank: Private
* Gender: Male
* Age: 31
* Description: Biracial Caucasian Hispanic male, muscular build weighing 185.7 lbs standing 6.0 ft in height, benching 300+ lbs, enlisted in the u.s. army 4 years ago, was sent by the government and assigned to Unit-8 his fourth year, equipped with high-technological thermal gear, digital camouflaged overalls, MOLLE tactical vest, full body kevlar vest, leather combat boots and leather gloves. Primary weapon: M4a1 SOPMOD (Foregrip, flash rep., tactical light, heavy threaded barrel, magpul & collapsipal stock) Secondary Weapon: Beretta Model 9 w/ fixed night sights & under rail tactical light. Other equipment varies by operation requirements
p.s.s. I think everyone should use similar weapons and gear so it isn't all too mixed up. Because being too mixed up will just look messy.

Wait... what is this?

Soul, not to be rude, but your app isn't really the best. 300lb is extremely overpowered, especially for someone weighing 185lb.
-4 years and still a private? Bro, you get promoted after 1/2 or one year, but 4 years is just sad, your character must have been very lazy.
-Assigned to Unit-8, eh? That sounds nice.
-Oh... bloody hell, this looks like something out of CoD. After Unit-8, everything here was just entirely unnecessary. This has nothing to do with your character, it all needs to be omitted. This could have been mentioned somewhere during the RP.

All in all, this is a major Gary Stu. Besides being a Private for four years (unacceptable), this is so overpowered. You need to list cons, personality, what makes that person who he is. All I see is one Physical OP trait, a nice story touch (Unit-8), and a CoD snippit.

On the subject of this RP, I'd join, but it's already turned into an OOC discussion. What do?

Soulzarath wrote:Oh lol sorry. But it clearly stated that everyone in Unit-8 starts out as a private so that's why I listed myself private. 300 sounds overpowered? I was originally gonna make it 400+. Also CoD who gives a fuck. I play CoD sometimes and I don't give a shit. Although I honestly prefer Battlefield 3 over any CoD. But what makes this related to CoD? Because I involved some weapon attachments that are featured in CoD? Like god damn dude stop being so obsessed over CoD it's a fucking vid game. Now excuse me my gf is texting me lol.

Ltn Vasquez wrote:Also, if you think it's because of my name, please ex cuse me, this name is obsolete to my interest now.

Soulzarath wrote:

Ltn Vasquez wrote:Also, if you think it's because of my name, please ex cuse me, this name is obsolete to my interest now.

Actually I wasn't even thinking about your name. And I don't even know how it's associated with the game. Oh shit now I can rap. Well I guess I'm done here so now I can go fap.

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Soulzarath wrote:

Ltn Vasquez wrote:

Soulzarath wrote:May I enlist?

* Name: Eko Jr Bloodheart
* Rank: Private
* Gender: Male
* Age: 31
* Description: Biracial Caucasian Hispanic male, muscular build weighing 185.7 lbs standing 6.0 ft in height, benching 300+ lbs, enlisted in the u.s. army 4 years ago, was sent by the government and assigned to Unit-8 his fourth year, equipped with high-technological thermal gear, digital camouflaged overalls, MOLLE tactical vest, full body kevlar vest, leather combat boots and leather gloves. Primary weapon: M4a1 SOPMOD (Foregrip, flash rep., tactical light, heavy threaded barrel, magpul & collapsipal stock) Secondary Weapon: Beretta Model 9 w/ fixed night sights & under rail tactical light. Other equipment varies by operation requirements
p.s.s. I think everyone should use similar weapons and gear so it isn't all too mixed up. Because being too mixed up will just look messy.

Wait... what is this?

Soul, not to be rude, but your app isn't really the best. 300lb is extremely overpowered, especially for someone weighing 185lb.
-4 years and still a private? Bro, you get promoted after 1/2 or one year, but 4 years is just sad, your character must have been very lazy.
-Assigned to Unit-8, eh? That sounds nice.
-Oh... bloody hell, this looks like something out of CoD. After Unit-8, everything here was just entirely unnecessary. This has nothing to do with your character, it all needs to be omitted. This could have been mentioned somewhere during the RP.

All in all, this is a major Gary Stu. Besides being a Private for four years (unacceptable), this is so overpowered. You need to list cons, personality, what makes that person who he is. All I see is one Physical OP trait, a nice story touch (Unit-8), and a CoD snippit.

On the subject of this RP, I'd join, but it's already turned into an OOC discussion. What do?

Oh lol sorry. But it clearly stated that everyone in Unit-8 starts out as a private so that's why I listed myself private. 300 sounds overpowered? I was originally gonna make it 400+. Also CoD who gives a fuck. I play CoD sometimes and I don't give a shit. Although I honestly prefer Battlefield 3 over any CoD. But what makes this related to CoD? Because I involved some weapon attachments that are featured in CoD? Like god damn dude stop being so obsessed over CoD it's a fucking vid game. Now excuse me my gf is texting me lol.

Soulzarath wrote:Damn alright do you want me to revise it from 300+ pounds to like 200+ pounds? And it's very possible for a human being to bench that much weight. Although I think that a human would who is capable of such a thing would weight more than around 180 pounds.

Soulzarath wrote:Damn alright do you want me to revise it from 300+ pounds to like 200+ pounds? And it's very possible for a human being to bench that much weight. Although I think that a human would who is capable of such a thing would weight more than around 180 pounds.

CristianHG wrote:

Soulzarath wrote:Damn alright do you want me to revise it from 300+ pounds to like 200+ pounds? And it's very possible for a human being to bench that much weight. Although I think that a human would who is capable of such a thing would weight more than around 180 pounds.

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