Perfect. Simple and straghtforward, requires no confusing explanations.Glitch wrote:Instances of SCP-<insert number here>/sentient ponies start appearing on earth, the Foundation, as with all anomalous objects, start containing them, originally in sites with other SCP's, but eventually moved them all to their own site.
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#492Very well. I guess that means one in favour of Glitch.
Anyway, unless someone wants to add further opinion into the stories, back to ideas I presume...?
Anyway, unless someone wants to add further opinion into the stories, back to ideas I presume...?
The Nightmares...will last...FOREVEEEEERRRRR!
In the event that Nightmare Tank tries to take charge, Dr. Glitch is to warn it, until it ceases its behaviour.
In the event that Nightmare Tank tries to take charge, Dr. Glitch is to warn it, until it ceases its behaviour.
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#493I spent little time putting any if those together, of coarse there is going to be plot holes. Rough drafts are never complete stories, they are ideas put down on paper. I also have a small case of dyslexia making it harder for me than most.
I have nothing els to do, because I don't have a computer at home I can use. I'm also on fall break until next monday.
I haven't gotten to Rarity or Applejack yet.
Most of your points are correct. I will fix all of the mistakes once I get Rarity and Applejack done.
I posted those to get an overall opinion, not for you guys to break down every line of it.
How come so much anger? Did I do something wrong other than provide "terrible" story?
I have nothing els to do, because I don't have a computer at home I can use. I'm also on fall break until next monday.
I haven't gotten to Rarity or Applejack yet.
Most of your points are correct. I will fix all of the mistakes once I get Rarity and Applejack done.
I posted those to get an overall opinion, not for you guys to break down every line of it.
How come so much anger? Did I do something wrong other than provide "terrible" story?
The day I quit is tha day I die.
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#494It's called criticing. If you're goining to fix the story you have to know about all its flaws.Pony wrote:I posted those to get an overall gudgement, not one where you break down every line of it.
Why do you assume I'm angry? You can't hear my tone of voice through text.Pony wrote:How come so much anger? Did I do something wrong other than provide "terrible" story?
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#495Sorry. You sounded a little angry at points with your curses.
I thank you for the criticism.
I thank you for the criticism.
The day I quit is tha day I die.
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#496/me is surprised Commander agrees with me considering all the douchebaggery I have caused throughout the year.CommanderPro100 wrote:Perfect. Simple and straghtforward, requires no confusing explanations.Glitch wrote:Instances of SCP-<insert number here>/sentient ponies start appearing on earth, the Foundation, as with all anomalous objects, start containing them, originally in sites with other SCP's, but eventually moved them all to their own site.
But yeah, I do agree the story has quite a few inconsistently and is slightly long winded.
I'm not here as much right now, mention me on our Discord server if you need anything.
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#497Hmm, lack of consistency for Luna's story? Alright, well that's something that'll hopefully be ironed out before long. Story length might be another thing. After all, these documents are only so long in length...
The Nightmares...will last...FOREVEEEEERRRRR!
In the event that Nightmare Tank tries to take charge, Dr. Glitch is to warn it, until it ceases its behaviour.
In the event that Nightmare Tank tries to take charge, Dr. Glitch is to warn it, until it ceases its behaviour.
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#498I'll push to get Rarity and Applejack done, and I'll post them within the next fifteen hours.
The day I quit is tha day I die.
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#499Hold on a minute Luna. I don't think you should push for those yet. Maybe go back along the current revisions and patch them up as advised. I think this would be best. Quality over quantity, right guys?
The Nightmares...will last...FOREVEEEEERRRRR!
In the event that Nightmare Tank tries to take charge, Dr. Glitch is to warn it, until it ceases its behaviour.
In the event that Nightmare Tank tries to take charge, Dr. Glitch is to warn it, until it ceases its behaviour.
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#500Very well. I'll revise what I have.
I revised Rainbow's story. What do you think?
I revised Rainbow's story. What do you think?
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The day I quit is tha day I die.